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    dots Submission Name: Cold Like Medots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    dotsCold Like Medots
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    You think you're cold like me
    Brother let me tell you

    You're the fire and the flame
    Hot and bright but fragile and tame

    You think you're cold like me
    Brother let me tell you


    I am a glacier




    Submitted on 2013-07-16 01:16:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sounds pretty personal. I really don't know what to say. This seems so particularly directed at someone I feel like I should leave the room. The intimacy makes me feel rude for even reading it.
    | Posted on 2015-07-06 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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