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    dots Submission Name: Will they ever love me?dots
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    Author: Jam2013
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    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Despair...


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    dotsWill they ever love me?dots
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    Will they ever love me like they loved him?
    Am I just filling in the space till they start again?
    All the love expressed in words everywhere
    I have never known, so my heart does despair.

    I try with all my might, giving all my life
    but it just does not seem to be enough, I am not him
    this is really tuff.

    My heart desires and breaks for my lover
    I cannot walk away how can I recover

    Will they ever love me, live for me, breathe for me, like I do for them or am I in only holding a place for him?




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