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    dots Submission Name: Being A Christiandots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBeing A Christiandots
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    Grace speaking for every moment that I breathe
    allowing me to freely walk ahead with no fear and no doubt
    I can dive into murky waters and come out cleansed

    Faith being the foot that falls one step at a time
    I can confidently journey and expect to arrive at my destination

    There is so much to love a long the way
    More than just a mother but mothers
    More than just a father but fathers
    Children
    Brothers and Sisters
    Tugging on my heart
    the least of these

    There are so many more songs to create as I walk ahead
    whistling and humming tunes born in a grand scale memory of the universe and existence I cannot comprehend
    Fighting for me
    Going before me to conquer battles that I may never see

    At last there is left nothing but a clean grateful heart
    the soft space between my knees and the natural earth that I call home





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