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Author: stormkrow
ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 51 /52 /39
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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So I walk around town
smoking a joint
and what do I see
before my hallucinogenic eyes

A little red fairy
so fuzzy and warm
who led me to
the river of booze

So I walk around town
smoking a bowl
and what do I hear
by my shinny little ears

A choir of penguins
singing to a harpsichord
a chorus so haunting
I break my own leg running
from them

So I walk around town
smoking again
and what do I see and here

A voice from behind
saying hey honey you open
or closed

So I said give me enough
to smoke to oblivion
and I'll promise to send a post card
from hell

So I walk through town
so bloody gone
I see shadows fucking the ground

I chased fireflies that lead
me to the end of the world

I 've smoked my self to oblivion
and I will send you a post card from hell
I am open for pleasure and pain
just don't come down here through
the river stixs
and bring a lighter
God dam it

Submitted on 2013-07-22 21:10:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Mature topic, not graphic or anything, but certainly entertaining. I've always enjoyed repetitive things, because they kind of keep you in tune with the subject, but it's sorta messy in my opinion. Although, pretty fun to read. What's neat when it's not cool? Thanks for sharing.
| Posted on 2013-07-24 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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