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    Author: southernswagger
    ASL Info:    23/f/england
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 9/54/45
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    These angels with wings,
    so kindly sing;
    telling stories and telling stories.
    These words within,
    they are not sin,
    they were here to begin with.
    And they'll be here to live with.

    Your demons won't burn in hell without you.
    As, if they are to burn, then you will burn too.

    You can read all the fiction in the world,
    but you still have to live in the world with it.
    Jesus might say he will save you,
    but like the demons in your head,
    He will burn too.

    If you want to be good,
    fuck a book.





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      i like this a lot. love the line:
    "Your demons won't burn in hell without you'.
    As, if they are to burn, then you will burn too"
    this seems like a fun little rant towards the end, weirdly it made me smile because it reminds me (i do take a lot of things my own way and twist them so sorry if this isnt what you wanted to convey) but it just reminds me of a big f you to people trying to conform others to anything not just religion but life in general...to me this says im gonna do what i want despite your warnings and lectures, im gonna do what i need to do
    | Posted on 2013-08-02 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol.

    Wow.

    This was a bit odd, but also equally fantastic and I had to twist my head a bit at the end there.

    I loved this part!

    You can read all the fiction in the world,
    but you still have to live in the world with it.
    Jesus might say he will save you,
    but like the demons in your head,
    He will burn too.

    The image was very interesting, and I love the insinuation that whatever you read, whatever affects you, whatever you believe in, you`ll have to live with it. Don`t know what you meant exactly, but that`s how I read it.

    Nice and interesting piece!
    | Posted on 2013-07-24 00:00:00 | by ChrystalR | [ Reply to This ]
      It's a little bit hard to get in though!!! You gotta break out the lubrication ink. And you'll need protection unless you want a whole bunch of little memos running around and worse you never know how many people have been reading them. I hear some of the diseases are incurable. Besides, practically the whole lot of them are bi-sexual and you know what kind of problems that can bring.....

    Bruce

    PS: I got it, you could eat them instead.....I wonder if they're digestible..... like 'Holy Shit'!
    | Posted on 2013-07-23 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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