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    dots Submission Name: Clipped Wingsdots
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    Author: Crow
    ASL Info:    21/f/Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    3.93 - 409/471/70
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 432
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       MOST of the credit for the words in this little "poem" go to gotcha_crazy. I just read his comment again and couldn't help but respond equally to it. ^.~ For you, gotcha_crazy. ::maniacle laughter::


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    dotsClipped Wingsdots
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    Now work Crow,
    Or I'll clip your wings.
    (Please sir spare my plumage)
    None more doth this quarry sings.
    (its voice is cold and dead)
    Do as told,
    And quick to quill.
    (Or keyboard as it be)
    Some may have some blood to spill.
    (Like ink from the tip of my pen)
    And next time plagarism finds thee,
    Rap, rap, rapping at my door.
    (I gave thee credit, punish not I)
    Face and head will find the floor.
    (shows /your/ personality)
    So quick young birdie,
    Lest I take thee,
    To the place where none can see.
    (Not that, I beg you...deep into night...I shall write)




    Submitted on 2004-08-04 06:22:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The interaction I see betwixt these two characters is powerful. 'Course, You know MY dramatic mind, I make up characters to people's poems! I think a good alternate title might be 'Like Ink From the Tip of my Pen.' Though perhaps not, because then it might take it entirely in a different direction. An idea for a later work perhaps?
    | Posted on 2005-04-04 00:00:00 | by Trufflepiggy | [ Reply to This ]
      I found this one very interesting and light. More to my taste. I don't know if it's your spirit or your evil twin forcing you to write, but whatever (or whoever), they did a really nice job here. a nice way to eliminate writer's block, I'd say. love the two people talking in this one.
    | Posted on 2005-03-10 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]
      very cool, sicobe. I'm sending you a plumage in the rofty pack. youj ust don't know it yet. A hawk plumage, specifically. And as far as the poem goes, reminds me of Tarul. A wondrous stress relif system he is. Have a good one...-rue
    | Posted on 2004-08-06 00:00:00 | by Rue | [ Reply to This ]



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