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    dots Submission Name: My worst enemydots

    Author: Bluedreams
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    dotsMy worst enemydots

    Is love bad or good? That is up to you. Think ahead when going in a relationship. Think for yourself, ask yourself; is this a trap? If so, then run away, forget her and never look back.

    Once you're trapped, you will feel special. As the world surrounds you. The feeling of excitement, joy, trouble and dreams (illusions) will fill your mind. The girl knows this deep within too whether she's aware of it or not; you are NOT meant to be, and the one who is most aware of the truth will be hurt the most at the end.

    I was the one who was aware of it from the start, I lied to myself believing this could work out. Now I'm getting mental, while she party with other guys.

    But I strengthen myself; weeks later I was back in my normal state! No, I was even greater than before, I had new goals!
    She came back, as forgiving as I was, she fcked my mind over again. Now I'm struggling, and hope this love will go away. Cause my goals are what I'm struggling for, and this type of trap is my worst enemy.

    Submitted on 2013-07-31 00:25:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      First of all welcome to the site!

    There are all types of people in this world and sadly enough the users outweigh the honest folks, but I'm not sure it's a reason to give up searching. Here are a few of my relationship rules for looking.

    1.. Don't look... never depend on someone else for your happiness; it comes from within.
    2. It's only a relationship if your both working on it...if not you're not really a couple (it implies 2)
    3. Love in not finite..you can love more than one person but never in the same way. If your heart is touched, that person has changed you so you will never be that same person again. But the new person is usually improved.
    4. Every realtionship need space. Teams are made of individuals with different strengths, so are couples. Use the space to keep your strengths fit.
    5. Never regret an old relationship...learn from it and move on. Regret creates bitterness which blinds us to happiness.

    Okay now that I've preached, remember that the perfect person for you will come, and the flaws won't worry you because they will fit with yours perfectly.
    | Posted on 2013-07-31 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]

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