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    dots Submission Name: The Forgotten Hymn & The Lostdots

    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       Do we forget the ones of our past? Enjoy?

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    dotsThe Forgotten Hymn & The Lostdots

    With a sweep of the mighty divine,
    painting heaven carmine; canary and cornflower-
    Timeless memories, you can hear that phantom sound,
    of the souls that smiled; laughing profound-
    Tendrils of poison ivy drown that name,
    just as time forgets prayers profane,

    With a whimper divinity roars,
    colliding maelstroms; crashing gates and Hell-storm.
    No rest for the wicked upon these or distant shores;
    give the peaceful shoals to benevolent souls.
    Escape eternity- Immortal crutch-

    Etch upon the sand a face forgotten;
    relish the love begotten-
    Forget not the forgotten;
    the lost we've begotten-

    Submitted on 2013-07-31 12:51:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Strange as it might seem my genetics, or body incarnate, reflect exactly phenomenon. How often i've wondered who all I've been. It seems to me that most people don't even consider these facts, I however enjoy these contemplations.


    PS: Why would I want to, of manifest destiny and intrinsic affinity with infiniteness, escape eternity?
    | Posted on 2013-07-31 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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