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    dots Submission Name: Every Single Yeardots
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    Author: Kael Fenshir
    ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17/57/52
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEvery Single Yeardots
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    Tomorrow is your birthday
    We've shared plenty of laughs
    Our creations and ideas of young kids
    Constantly getting stung by bumbles and wasps
    Dressing our son in goofy lion outfits
    And pranking him with silly accent plans
    I can't believe you even loved that name
    The one that I could have had
    I'm overly happy that we remained friends
    And that you stayed the same
    After hours of talking
    It seemed that we're both just screwed
    Upside down
    In and out
    We're evenly fucked 'til the end
    Fortunately we're content with our paths
    You still remember the Loganberry
    As I remember your special, special birthday.
    Happy birthday




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