Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Every Single Yeardots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Kael Fenshir
    ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17/57/52
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 832
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 778



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsEvery Single Yeardots
    -------------------------------------------


    Tomorrow is your birthday
    We've shared plenty of laughs
    Our creations and ideas of young kids
    Constantly getting stung by bumbles and wasps
    Dressing our son in goofy lion outfits
    And pranking him with silly accent plans
    I can't believe you even loved that name
    The one that I could have had
    I'm overly happy that we remained friends
    And that you stayed the same
    After hours of talking
    It seemed that we're both just screwed
    Upside down
    In and out
    We're evenly fucked 'til the end
    Fortunately we're content with our paths
    You still remember the Loganberry
    As I remember your special, special birthday.
    Happy birthday




    Submitted on 2013-07-31 16:24:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    197695

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry