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    dots Submission Name: Joedots
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    Author: unwantedlove20
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 16/12/11
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 897
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       Just something I let off my chest while on Skype.


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    dotsJoedots
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    I am currently on Skype
    With the love of my life.
    Does he love me too?
    I can't be sure...
    HE says he does, but I've been lied to before.
    I've been ignorant enough to believe when lied to.
    But this time, something feels different.
    Something feels right. So right.
    I'm a virgin, but will I be for long?
    Could he be the one I give myself to?
    I want him. I love him.
    He wants me.. He loves me?
    He's been patient. He isn't an asshole about the situation.
    I feel like there may be some sort of connection with him.
    A connection I can honestly say I have never felt before.
    We have been through a lot.
    He is the star basketball player at school that everybody wants.
    Who am I?
    Nobody.
    Yet he still wants me?
    I will continue to fight for him.
    Because I love him.
    Hopefully it's not all for nothing.
    Hopefully
    he
    loves
    me
    too..




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      i absolutely love when people just write. its so freeing...you know how some people just want to conform writing into styles, while they work and its beautiful, its not the same as just writing. it gets everything you want out, out...i prefer reading poetry like this because you really feel what the writer is feeling...great read.
    | Posted on 2013-08-02 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]


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