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Skeleton Panini

Author: Kael Fenshir
ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17 /57 /52
Words: 70
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Skeleton Panini

When I think of you
My insides melt like a homemade panini
Fingers crossed
Hearts are heavy
Shortened of breath
I stare at the moon
Someone that night
Was stoned n' gloom
I know it was you
You said so yourself
Your entire being is so precious
Precious and lush
Our late night conversations
Filled our bellies
I love you so much
That you put jellies in muh' skellies.

Submitted on 2013-08-09 23:28:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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