Skeleton Panini

Author: Kael Fenshir ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17 /57 /52 Words: 70

Class/Type: Poetry /Misc Total Views: 1674 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 482

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Skeleton Panini

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When I think of you My insides melt like a homemade panini Fingers crossed Hearts are heavy Shortened of breath I stare at the moon Someone that night Was stoned n' gloom I know it was you You said so yourself Your entire being is so precious Precious and lush Our late night conversations Filled our bellies I love you so much That you put jellies in muh' skellies.

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