Skeleton Panini by Kael Fenshir

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Submission Name: Skeleton Panini dots

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Author:	Kael Fenshir
ASL Info:	26 / M / That weird place
Elite Ratio:	2.18 - 17/57/52
Words:	70

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	896
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Skeleton Panini dots

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When I think of you
My insides melt like a homemade panini
Fingers crossed
Hearts are heavy
Shortened of breath
I stare at the moon
Someone that night
Was stoned n' gloom
I know it was you
You said so yourself
Your entire being is so precious
Precious and lush
Our late night conversations
Filled our bellies
I love you so much
That you put jellies in muh' skellies.

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