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    dots Submission Name: Skeleton Paninidots
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    Author: Kael Fenshir
    ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17/57/52
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSkeleton Paninidots
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    When I think of you
    My insides melt like a homemade panini
    Fingers crossed
    Hearts are heavy
    Shortened of breath
    I stare at the moon
    Someone that night
    Was stoned n' gloom
    I know it was you
    You said so yourself
    Your entire being is so precious
    Precious and lush
    Our late night conversations
    Filled our bellies
    I love you so much
    That you put jellies in muh' skellies.




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