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    dots Submission Name: Mouth Sewn Shutdots
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    ASL Info:    17/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMouth Sewn Shutdots
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    I want to kiss her
    so passionately and deeply,
    but I'm in a rut.
    You see it's hard to give kisses
    when your mouth is sewn shut.




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