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Answer, My Life

Author: Kael Fenshir
ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17 /57 /52
Words: 111
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Answer, My Life

I opened my hands
With love I covered my eyes
The darkness made sense to my sight
Now I knew who I was

Missing pages
To the book that is my life
I reminded you always
Of my care and my plight

I begged for forgiveness
I asked you to be my wife
I then found another
Nothing left now but strife

I know you know
That I love you
I miss you every single day
Fate in a theater of play

So come hold my hand
The one that's covered in blood
I've worked this flesh
You're the only thing left to love

Submitted on 2013-08-11 23:00:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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