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    dots Submission Name: Field of Lovedots
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    Author: Kael Fenshir
    ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17/57/52
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsField of Lovedots
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    I want to find that giant sunflower field
    O' how it grows 'til it reaches the sky
    Where its comforting friends wrap their billowy souls around
    Around their gentle blessed heads




    Submitted on 2013-08-11 23:08:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You have a beautiful talent for simplicity and eloquence in this writing. The imagery was sweet and captivating.
    | Posted on 2015-07-04 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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