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    dots Submission Name: For Trevordots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFor Trevordots
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    I fell in love
    with those perfect, straight teeth
    hidden behind that thick beard
    that he refuses to trim, and the sound
    of a Harley-Davidson motorcycle
    on the roads of a college town at midnight.

    He is the first person
    that I have ever loved completely,
    and the first person
    ever to touch me and not
    make me feel like human garbage
    afterward.

    He has made me trade out all of my
    red flags for white ones.
    He has taken away all of the needles
    that prick the back of my mind when I
    walk home alone at night.

    He has run his hands over all of the broken glass
    that I let my skin heal over.
    These are the same wounds that sometimes open up when he tries to make love to me
    when I'm laying on my back
    and it's past 1 am.

    He does not see me as damaged.
    He sees me as a survivor, a warrior woman, and not a shadow.
    He knows that when I step in one of those carefully hidden bear traps
    constructed from panic and gut-wrenching fear,
    that I am still healing.

    He keeps me grounded.




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