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    dots Submission Name: Unsent Lettersdots
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    Author: DaniEllis
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 6/7/8
    Words: 267
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Dear unforgotten past,
    I've written a thousand letters
    Telling you things that I could never say...
    The anger, hurt, and sorrow
    That will never go away.
    Never sent them though
    I thought you wouldn't care
    Just how much damage you did;
    The constant pain I couldn't share...
    Sometimes I look at my wrists
    Just to see your face
    Retrace the scars with my fingertips,
    And relive the pain time can't erase...
    The scars I have are from both of us
    I hurt on the inside and out.
    Im still not sure what hurts the most
    But at least I'm not living in doubt.
    I never got to tell you how I felt after that day
    So for the longest time you could only guess...
    And then you were asked all those questions,
    and lied-You only contributed to the mess.
    I never got to tell you,
    I was glad that you picked me-For anyone else that you could've destroyed
    Would never again be free.
    I never got to tell you how it feels
    To be beaten till your blue,
    And I guess you're never going to know
    Because it never happened to you.
    I never got to show you
    The broken soul, bruises, and torn up heart...
    But I can tell you now in detail
    How it felt when you tore me apart.
    I've written a thousand letters
    Describing the feelings I never got out...
    The love, and pain, and torment-That I will never be without.
    But this will never be sent
    And things will never get better
    And I'm wondering why I bother;
    Writing another unsent letter.




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