:) Yes, it was from a horrible experience, but it doesn't hurt anymore, except the excruciating pain on the anniversary every year, for some reason it hurts then. idky, but it doesn't hurt anymore. It only made me stronger.
this I liked . the format could be different there is so much rawness in this if you broke it up it would make it more powerful example:
A familiar voice
makes it hurt
so much more...
etched in my mind
what's left of me
that being said I am not sure if you wrote this from some horrible personal experience. I hope not but if so keep writing it removes the hurt from inside you and puts it on paper it can't hurt you there ..no one can hurt you there!