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    dots Submission Name: I Can No Longer Stopdots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 41/64/78
    Words: 3
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1450
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 23



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    dotsI Can No Longer Stopdots
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    Published somewhere now




    Submitted on 2013-08-22 14:09:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I liked this it flows good and I like the format you chose I am a little confused on this line:

    but a lie it still feels like

    I don't know why it sticks out to me and I cant suggest anything but just wanted to you look at it
    thankyou for submitting I look forward to reading more of your work
    | Posted on 2013-08-23 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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