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    dots Submission Name: Uglierdots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       I have a vague feeling the ending is not right ??? any suggestions

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    It strangles me
    I no longer fight
    Not glamorous
    Not like a movie
    Painful, real
    I can feel me dying
    And not the pretty way
    No gently closing eyelids
    I can smell the rotting
    Not a hospital room flowers and antiseptic
    No steady beeping that slowly fades
    Like the hurt is welcome
    It keeps you seeing
    Images conjured, drift in
    It’s never birthdays or oceans

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