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    dots Submission Name: Realismdots
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    Author: lolaxelmo
    ASL Info:    23/F/IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 34/37/38
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsRealismdots
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    i have been in and out of love
    feelings of elation mistook
    for a tender glance.
    intuitive miscalculations
    underestimating the notion
    i, the Adam of its calling—
    named but the idea
    doesn't adhere
    to anything real




    Submitted on 2013-08-24 13:34:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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