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    dots Submission Name: Sanity and Peace dots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    24/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 343/189/83
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Describing emotions felt when seeing an ex.


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    dotsSanity and Peace dots
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    My heart rate increases
    as I come to a junction.
    Each lung ceases,
    my body loses function.
    A knot forms in my throat,
    it's difficult to swallow.
    Outside I feel numb,
    inside I feel hollow.
    My eyes begin to burn,
    my cheeks start to heat,
    my whole body trembles,
    tears slowly secrete.
    My chest contracts
    with a sharp, stabbing pain.
    I almost collapse
    as I stare with disdain.
    Before my glaring eyes,
    they're beautiful together.
    I go to step forward,
    but I'm bound by tethers.
    I want to intervene,
    but my mind says "back off".
    So my subconscious
    folds her arms and scoffs.
    I may seem jealous,
    like I need to take a breather.
    But I don't want him back,
    I just don't want him happy either.
    My mind stills my body
    and whispers "leave them be;
    resurrect your sanity,
    and find your own peace."




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