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    dots Submission Name: Realism (Edit)dots
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    Author: lolaxelmo
    ASL Info:    23/F/IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 34/37/38
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsRealism (Edit)dots
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    love, i’ve willfully been
    fallen with and stepped
    back away, mutual,
    one-sided numbers add up
    but i never remember the differences.
    feelings of doubt mistook
    for elation ending in
    intuitive miscalculations.
    i, the Adam of its calling—
    named, identified
    but the notion
    does not adhere
    to anything real




    Submitted on 2013-08-26 13:24:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmm...I take it you've been "in love" a time or two. out of it as well...Relationship problems perhaps? oh well...what do I know. im not even old enough to drive yet! but really, if I sit and think about it a while its pretty deep and shows how you feel.
    | Posted on 2013-09-13 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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