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    dots Submission Name: In The Winddots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIn The Winddots
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    Drifting away
    Am I but a kiss in the wind
    an unheard whisper perhaps
    from one lover to another

    Hidden thoughts and memories
    of infidelities
    Moonlit walks in the middle of winter
    from one home to another

    A new necklace, a new ring
    not a penny from her pocket
    or yours




    Submitted on 2013-08-26 20:52:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow! I like that, very good imagines, really good. poe

    if you dare read my other , I am a SOB.
    | Posted on 2013-08-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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