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    dots Submission Name: In the works dots
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    Author: OneDarkFlame92
    ASL Info:    23/m/Numeanor
    Elite Ratio:    5.28 - 455/419/222
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Be patient if I can't write your poem just yet.

    I don't have the need to retell our first night under the exploding sky,
    or typically describe the butterflies in my stomach when I first see you walk towards me

    There will be poems about your inviting eyes that I yearn to see one last time, and how much I loved the way you used to always pulled me closer

    I'd much rather live out stanzas with you than painfully write them out, ball them up and throw them away.

    I'd much rather kiss you without telling the world about your taste.

    So, please understand if I don't want to write your poem just yet.




    Submitted on 2013-08-27 03:11:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "I'd much rather kiss you without telling the world about your taste."

    I know Bruce already quoted it. It's just really good. My favorite in this piece. It's that little gem that I look for whenever I read you.

    I have missed this.
    | Posted on 2013-08-30 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]
      "I'd much rather kiss you without telling the world about your taste." Amen brethren, nonetheless of you enigma resemble. I wouldn't psychic clarity lie. What might it vulnerability expose. Am I capable of defending. It might be pretentiously precocious. Petulantly I claim you as mine. Who could argue that, of it's the nature of survival of species aimed pier pair appearance. Besides, how could I attempt to use words to describe such monumental collusions. I'd become lost in the quandaries of the psychic quagmire, tirade treatise and all. I
    mean, there's a reason why writing things out can be painful, in order to be logistically inductive we have to rise above the emotional and be assertively sentient. Whoa, the ramifications of all of that. Like seriously dude, get down, I could use some vicariously inspirational recalcitrance.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-08-27 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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