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Submission Name: Enter into it again dots

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Author:	Dead Bell
ASL Info:	23/m/Ire
Elite Ratio:	2.42 - 48/129/125
Words:	70

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	692
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Enter into it again dots

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Enter into it again
This dark seeming naked place
In tapping darkness
And plant the seedling light

As now what our sun surrounds
Has lapsed into banality
Let’s exhume the spirits river
To flow in icy cycles

Imagine this place as a cavern
Feeling dead and sourceless
Imagine now the warm wall of granite
Seedling sprout here heart restoring.

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