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    dots Submission Name: Enter into it againdots
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    Author: Dead Bell
    ASL Info:    23/m/Ire
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 48/129/125
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEnter into it againdots
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    Enter into it again
    This dark seeming naked place
    In tapping darkness
    And plant the seedling light

    As now what our sun surrounds
    Has lapsed into banality
    Let’s exhume the spirits river
    To flow in icy cycles

    Imagine this place as a cavern
    Feeling dead and sourceless
    Imagine now the warm wall of granite
    Seedling sprout here heart restoring.




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