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Submission Name:
Enter into it again
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Author:
Dead Bell
ASL Info:
23/m/Ire
Elite Ratio:
2.42 - 48/129/125
Words:
70
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
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Enter into it again
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Enter into it again
This dark seeming naked place
In tapping darkness
And plant the seedling light
As now what our sun surrounds
Has lapsed into banality
Let’s exhume the spirits river
To flow in icy cycles
Imagine this place as a cavern
Feeling dead and sourceless
Imagine now the warm wall of granite
Seedling sprout here heart restoring.
Submitted on 2013-09-06 15:09:39
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