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Author: Rainin_Raspbery
ASL Info:    22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
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I can feel a distance growing between us
Wondering whats the cause
am i the one to blame
with all my misfortunes and shame
So quickly we grew
Now were becoming unglued




Submitted on 2013-09-08 18:14:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I think in that last line you meant "we're." It is indeed a sad poem. Relationships happen and then they end. It's just the cycle of how things go. As the French say "C'est la vie." Don't blame yourself. It's difficult to find someone that grows in the same direction that you do. Don't ever think that you're not worth the person you're with because it simply isn't true. If someone is making you feel this way then move on. You'll find someone who appreciates everything you've got and what you are. Don't settle for anything less!
| Posted on 2013-09-21 00:00:00 | by lolaxelmo | [ Reply to This ]
  that's sad...im guessing there was some relationship problems when you wrote this and you were hurting and confused. ive been through that...things will get better though.

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Teofila<3
| Posted on 2013-09-13 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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