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    dots Submission Name: Masturbationdots

    Author: Iram
    ASL Info:    25/F/from your world
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 50/62/55
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    What is erupting?
    A flamboyant annoyance or a forced orgasm
    An excreted gothic poem or a squirting howl
    The leakage from your discontented off-pant pen
    Drags your life this way, walking on lines and lust
    Rubbing your feather's moistened tip against a paper
    Where its nib trembles in black, and dances in blue
    Moving fro and to in a drunken rhyme
    High and down, like metaphors and fables
    Like mounting volcanoes on your barren sheets
    Flaming whoever, whoever reads
    Faster and fastened and pleasing screams
    Oily words, wider legs and sweatening leans
    Flowing and weaving, overflowing and squeezed
    For how long will you chase an enchanted peace
    And muster your musk in papers or bed
    Tickling your pains with your perky nails
    And write your nerves till the ink bleeds
    So for how long will you explain this momentum
    For how long will you write to go to sleep
    And what will come after your blood shows up
    You will finger your soul or ply unleashed
    To what extent will you release?

    Submitted on 2013-09-12 18:12:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is hilarious. But it works. Great job

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