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    dots Submission Name: All Alonedots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
    Total Views: 672
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 602



    Description:
       I wrote this one night thinking about all those people who have left me...and left me feeling abandoned.


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    dotsAll Alonedots
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    I awake
    from panic and fear
    then shed a tear
    as I realize
    your not here
    you never were
    I see that now
    you left me here
    on the cold hard ground
    so I sit and cry
    asking "oh God why"
    why did you leave me here
    all alone
    I come back
    to an empty home
    no one to love
    no one to care
    nobodies even there
    because you left me here
    all alone
    nowhere to call my home
    no one to turn to
    nowhere to go
    why did you leave me here
    all alone...




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