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That Which is in Perpetuum

Author: BusterLILblock
ASL Info:    21/F
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Words: 102
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Yup. I am so done for...

That Which is in Perpetuum

She waited.
She waited for you.
Soundless vexation.

The breeze
Blew with arctic stillness.

The static
Hummed with jagged quiescence.

Her nights seemed never ending.
Amaranthine was the closing of day.
A particular void seeped within.

And her thousand moments of life seem to fall untouched.
Crowded walls seem unlived.
Her desolate core seemed to fire.



While sporadic placements of the souls were aligned.

Forty-eight eves,
To wait

She implored:

"I pray my soul be placed
Alongside yours."


Submitted on 2013-09-14 18:22:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is soo cute.
| Posted on 2013-11-09 00:00:00 | by geekyslacker | [ Reply to This ]

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