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Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 81
Class/Type: Poetry /You left me
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You're leaving me
I know you are
Its just so plain to see.
It hurts to watch
You walk away from me.
You'll never know
The pain you caused
Inside of me that day.
You're already gone,
But I am here to stay.
I'll stay and wait,
Wait my turn.
We'll meet again someday.
Because you're leaving me
I know you are
Its just so plain to see.
It hurts to watch you walk away,
Yet you walk away from me...

Submitted on 2013-09-16 16:45:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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