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    dots Submission Name: Leavingdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
    Total Views: 725
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    dotsLeavingdots
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    You're leaving me
    I know you are
    Its just so plain to see.
    It hurts to watch
    You walk away from me.
    You'll never know
    The pain you caused
    Inside of me that day.
    You're already gone,
    But I am here to stay.
    I'll stay and wait,
    Wait my turn.
    We'll meet again someday.
    Because you're leaving me
    I know you are
    Its just so plain to see.
    It hurts to watch you walk away,
    Yet you walk away from me...




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