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    dots Submission Name: Angel/Demon Loves Youdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAngel/Demon Loves Youdots
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    I'll be your angel
    Strong and true
    Always there to protect you.
    But like day and night
    Dark and light
    There are two sides to me,
    The one that will always hang around
    And the one you'll never see.
    The one that always hangs around
    Is the one good, pure, and sweet
    And with her I believe
    You should always be.
    The one cast in shadows
    You shall never meet.
    This one is probably dominant
    The dominant side of me.
    But either way
    I'll love you
    For all eternity...




    Submitted on 2013-09-16 16:54:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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