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    dots Submission Name: Contradicted Me || part 15dots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Nature
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       More like a journal entry.
    I don't exactly want feedback. I just wanted to post it somewhere. Journal entries bother me.


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    dotsContradicted Me || part 15dots
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    Change is not always a bad occurrence; to change for the better may simply be a comfort that one desires to achieve, thus reminding yourself to be what you want to be, isn't the same as pretending to be someone you are not.
    It may take a while - years in fact, but with time you will serve yourself justice, and not only give a better impression to others, but to yourself.
    Become someone you are proud to be, but to claim it simply because one doesn't have the patience to overcome what unwanted...That, my lovely companions, is a little something called 'fa├žade'.

    On that note, this is mostly a reflection on none other than myself. I am simply giving a word of advice to the public, however only taking time to think only about myself. I'm refraining from criticizing, because how much I want to change others will not do a single thing. You cannot change one, but one can change themselves, and that's all we must worry about.
    If not now, perhaps soon; if not soon, perhaps later - that's all I can say. No matter how many wars, arguments, laws passed, the world will do on its own. Myself? Only I can do such about that.
    So, in exchange for allowing me to change myself on my own accord, I am making a strong attempt to allow the world and its inhabitants to change on its own said time-frame.

    Enjoy yourselves, minions to pretentious, higher power.




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