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    dots Submission Name: I Need Youdots

    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsI Need Youdots

    When I enter the world
    Of darkness
    Is when I realize this
    My love will last
    As will your eternal kiss
    I ache sometimes
    With pain so true
    Just with wanting
    To be with you
    I need you...

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