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    dots Submission Name: Forever Alonedots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsForever Alonedots
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    Time passes slowly
    And you're on my mind
    Why can't I get through this
    Just leave it behind
    I sit in the dark
    Just wanting to leave
    Watching the things
    That you'll never see
    Black in my heart
    Blood on the floor
    All that I ask
    Is you love me once more
    I sit in the dark
    With thoughts all my own
    Wondering...
    Am I to be
    Forever alone?




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