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    dots Submission Name: Friendshipdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 539
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 300



    Description:
       For all my good friends.


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    dotsFriendshipdots
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    You are beautiful
    And smart
    In every single way
    But there's a yearning
    In my heart
    Just wanting you
    To stay
    I will love you forever
    Just promise your heart
    And this
    Is how our friendship
    Forever
    Got its start...




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