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    dots Submission Name: The Packdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210/104/71
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
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    dotsThe Packdots
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    Silent hunters
    Of the night
    Close your eyes
    And they take flight
    Running swiftly
    All the way
    Until the very
    Break of day.
    Hushed shadows
    Hit the ground
    But listen close
    They make no sound.
    Listen closer
    To your heart
    And you will know
    You are apart
    A wolf and the pack.
    A family strong and true.
    Once you're in
    You can't go back
    Not after you've become
    A part of the pack...




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