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    dots Submission Name: Your Lovedots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsYour Lovedots
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    Your love,
    Honest, strong, and true
    Your love,
    Will last forever
    And you shall never become blue
    Your love,
    Will guide you places
    You never thought you'd go
    Just follow your heart
    Let the blood flow
    For your love
    Will take you places
    You never thought you'd go...




    Submitted on 2013-09-17 16:59:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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