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    dots Submission Name: Awaydots

    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Away from all the clutter
    Away from all the noise
    Away from everybody
    Especially the boys
    Anywhere but here
    Anytime but now
    Stop these things around me
    That make me wonder how
    Everything in my mind
    Just push it all away
    There is just one thought
    That will remain forever
    And yet I love it
    All the same...

    Submitted on 2013-09-17 17:05:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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