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    dots Submission Name: To Be With Youdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsTo Be With Youdots
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    You looked at me
    Then I knew
    I had only come
    For you
    My only reason
    To be here now
    As you sit there
    Across the room
    In the corner
    All alone
    I reach for you
    And feel a hand
    Fingers glide
    Intertwining with mine
    Before I looked
    I realized then
    This was no
    Ordinary man
    No...
    It is him
    My soul mate
    My love
    I looked at you
    And instantly I knew
    I had only come
    To be with you...




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