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    dots Submission Name: Small chancedots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.41 - 5/110/127
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSmall chancedots
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    My heart is yours alone
    Even though you don't want it.
    I will always be here waiting
    For something that'll never happen.
    As long as we are alive
    On this barren earth.
    I will never give up
    All because... Of that small chance...




    Submitted on 2013-09-18 11:39:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm so sorry :'(
    | Posted on 2013-09-28 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      I say move on and do whatever you want! Don't let someone (or anyone) have this sort of control over you.
    | Posted on 2013-09-21 00:00:00 | by lolaxelmo | [ Reply to This ]


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