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    dots Submission Name: Missing but never gonedots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I will always love you...

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    dotsMissing but never gonedots

    I now walk alone
    The one I love is gone
    She may come back
    She may not
    I love her now more than ever
    They say you don't know,
    What you've got.
    Till it's gone.
    But for me
    I feel like she loves me
    She will return one day.
    This sorrow will dissipate.
    I will regain my happiness
    My heart will heal
    Nothing will stand in my way.

    Submitted on 2013-09-18 12:04:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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