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Submission Name: Play Whore dots

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Author:	Iram
ASL Info:	25/F/from your world
Elite Ratio:	2.66 - 50/62/55
Words:	74

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	975
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Play Whore dots

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Thy time is up playing a sane affection
Let my decisive whimper wade on
While thy lips sip the night's molten drops
Thy temptations rust in my weary palms
Alive and tossing under the skulls of hopes
I drink thy lust that pretends me humane
Slammed in thy bed to obey thy ropes
And suck thy fingers that write my domain
Whore me tonight to replay thy elopes
For I shall not come again.

Submitted on 2013-09-18 16:38:37 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Why time is up playing a sane affection
Let my indecisive whimper wade upon you
While lips sip this night's molten burning kiss
Temptations rust any in my weary palms, nightly
Alive to toss under the skull of hope and despair
I drink this lust that pretends to be me, humane
Slammed to a bed too obey the ropes, be tied
Sucking the fingers that write my domain
Whore me tonight to replay and elopes
For I shall not come again too taunt.

| Posted on 2013-09-23 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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