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    dots Submission Name: The Tempestdots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 806
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 585
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    Description:
       Worked on this one but clearly not as I intended yet. Will come over.


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    dotsThe Tempestdots
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    The Tempest.  

    The Tempest of Life
    The fabrications of my Soul
    Silently tread a timeless path.  

    From eternity to eternity.  

    In its wake the forces Of my Universe transcend.
    Shaking my very design Creating tides and eddies.  
    The Elements of my Time-Space.
    Shaping my Destiny
    The passages of my Light and Darkness
    Shudders.  

    Unknown forces  ever creating my Space
    Tangebly invisible
    Strangely remote Mystical.  
    The Tempest fills my Temple
    Revealing Future and Past.


    Rejoycing.
    Shaping sharing my Destiny.
    Life  borne from The Cradle of my Being,  
    The Tempest of Light and Darkness
    The Living Essence.

    The Source of ALL

    Awesome!

    Forever!




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