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    Author: AtrophyEmpathos
    ASL Info:    19 M California
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 45/55/29
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Her drug tastes of murder
    She infiltrates this temple
    With enemy sabotage
    Useless as this body
    She spoke of love
    Smiling at his suicide
    Laughing insanely
    Through painted lips




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