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    Author: AtrophyEmpathos
    ASL Info:    19 M California
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 45/55/29
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 454
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 522



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    Listen
    What you can't hear
    That's hope
    Drowning
    This machine
    Tears flesh and bone
    Burning alive
    These children
    Lost and helpless
    What you feel
    Replacement
    Colder
    Less alive
    Less vulnerable
    Compassion buried
    Martyred truth
    In darkness
    Controlled
    Unwilling
    Forgetting
    Desperate
    Angry
    Broken
    Obsolete
    Senseless
    Feeding all the fucking time.




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