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    Author: AtrophyEmpathos
    ASL Info:    19 M California
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 45/55/29
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 410
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    Bytes: 633



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    Hey baby
    Did you lose your faith
    Falling here faster into
    This abandon
    What did you mean by love?
    That you would feel when
    It was convenient?
    Where will you go to hide your scars?
    Wide open eyes
    And fully asleep
    Giving in to the same old games
    You want to try me harder
    But I won't fail to find love again
    Without you
    If you think this is over
    Just try breathing without honesty
    Cause honestly you're just another one
    Addicted and malicious
    Just like you always were
    This is all your fault.




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