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    Author: AtrophyEmpathos
    ASL Info:    19 M California
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 45/55/29
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 466
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    Let me close my eyes to see you
    Spin me round til I'm dizzy
    I breath you in like oleander
    Our hearts whisper and
    Blossom
    I believe in you
    Let's take this chance
    You're all I dream.
    I believe in you
    Let's take this chance
    You're all I dream.




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