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    Author: AtrophyEmpathos
    ASL Info:    19 M California
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 45/55/29
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Rant/Angry
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    Will your fever take you away friend? Will you end up all alone? Is this the good fight or did you forget why? Are your reasons lost in translation? Did they ever make sense at all? What about your love? Is it so conditional? Those people who try to find your friendship and good graces you only seek to destroy. You win loneliness and shame. Your companions will be anger and disappointment. Your heart will bleed ugliness and judgement until it is snuffed from this world. And each time you despair you will remember how I tried to lift you up when you wanted to drag me down.




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