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    dots Submission Name: One shotdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsOne shotdots
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    This is my moment.
    This is my time.
    I must take this chance.
    I cannot give up now.
    I cannot let them win.
    It's time.
    For me.
    My victory.
    But i've only got one chance.
    One shot left.
    Only one.
    But this shot.
    Is worth taking.




    Submitted on 2013-09-29 17:50:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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